Assignment 10A – Elevator Pitch No. 1

Elevator Pitch No. 1


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  1. Hi Stephany,
    I really like your idea about connecting cell phones to doctor offices. I think this will help with the issue of playing phone tag, which usually happens to most people when they need to go to the doctor’s office. This opportunity will help make going to the doctor’s office more efficient and less stressful. I think it’s really smart that you want to connect this service to a cell phone, like you said, almost everyone has and is on their cell phone most of the time during the day.

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  2. Hi Stephany,
    I really liked your elevator pitch, I believe you provided all the necessary information to hook your listener in the short time frame to leave them wanting more details and leaving them with questions. You do look professional and that is always good when giving a pitch because it adds to the first impression you leave on someone. And being someone who has had this issue with the hassle of calling doctors offices, I think your solution about connecting the patients cell phone directly with the offices can eliminate a lot of time and frustration on both ends. Overall, good pitch!
    -Kayla

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  3. Stephany,
    You did a great job on your elevator pitch and sold your idea well to me at least. I think this idea isn't out there and it's honestly a great way to help people of all ages. I know I have commented on your posts before and I think the way you explained it here gave me more of an insight on your product. I think you did a good job maybe next time stand up because you're good with the camera. Goodjob!

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