Assignment 17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
Elevator Pitch No. 2
1. The Pitch:
2. A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch: I was surprised to have gotten compliments on my pitch, people were surprisingly positive. They were telling me to be more dynamic to move around the area more. Then trying to be more clear about what I am offering.
3. What did you change, based on the feedback? I decided to stand up and move around making sure to not only try and captivate the the audience with what I am saying as well as with my hand movements.
Hi Stephany,
ReplyDeleteI like your second elevator pitch! I was also given the feedback to be more dynamic for my second pitch and I think you accomplished that well. I think that it was a very smart choice to stand up and engage the audience with your hand gestures to make yourself and pitch seem engaging. Overall, good job and I can see the improvement from the first to second pitch.
Hey Stephany,
ReplyDeleteI like how easy it is to connect to your elevator pitch. Honestly, rather than thinking about commentary, your elevator pitch really makes me think about the situation you're describing and your product. So it's very well thought out. You also have a great clear voice. I think your elevator pitch is really well done, I would only work on the ending. I like that you put a goal but I think a last phrase that motivates the listener to take an action (like 'support my product' or 'download the app' dunno) would be great. Good work, keep going!